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Post by theintangiblefriends on Wed May 18, 2016 4:45 pm

It's pretty short. Still a work in progress and needs fleshing out, revising, tweaking, and formatting. But here it is. And I'd love to get some input as I continue finishing it. I'm a little nervous since I've never written a fanfic before, but you know how it is-- some ideas just need to get out of your head and onto "paper". Wink Hope you enjoy it. Smile

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11952200/1/Helga-Gets-Real
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Post by Jfgoofy on Sun May 22, 2016 12:36 pm

I think you had a pretty nice start. Although it felt like a transcript to an episode (which I really like and it isn't a commonly used form of fanfic style and I really like that), it was actually pretty good! I think you will get better and improve overtime!
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Post by theintangiblefriends on Sun May 22, 2016 12:45 pm

Thanks!! Smile
Yeah, scripting is new territory for me. I'm much better at prose fiction and poetry. But that's just how I see it in my head, so I thought I'd give it a whirl.
I want it to feel authentic to the show, in it's current timeline as it stands.
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Post by Jfgoofy on Sun May 22, 2016 12:51 pm

theintangiblefriends wrote:Thanks!! Smile
Yeah, scripting is new territory for me. I'm much better at prose fiction and poetry. But that's just how I see it in my head, so I thought I'd give it a whirl.
I want it to feel authentic to the show, in it's current timeline as it stands.

No problem! I really like your choice (I know we said the exact same stuff on that private conversation but we might make it public on this thread, so we can share our responses publicly)!
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